Marcquel, this analysis of a variety of instances where references are made to fate in Romeo and Juliet is very strong. It is clear and precise and develops the ideas with a high level of detail. All that is needed now for you to achieve the “Semantic Field” badge is for you to put it all together into one coherent whole where you explore how each of these devices builds on the effect of the other to create an idea about fate that underlies the whole play.
Let me know when you’ve had a go at this and I’ll give you some more feedback if needed.
October 15, 2015 at 11:54 am
Marcquel, this analysis of a variety of instances where references are made to fate in Romeo and Juliet is very strong. It is clear and precise and develops the ideas with a high level of detail. All that is needed now for you to achieve the “Semantic Field” badge is for you to put it all together into one coherent whole where you explore how each of these devices builds on the effect of the other to create an idea about fate that underlies the whole play.
Let me know when you’ve had a go at this and I’ll give you some more feedback if needed.
CW